T1+Persuade

30/3/11 - We will edit this together next week  To the Mount Maunganui lifesaving club __Monday 28th march__  LI:we are learning to write a persuasive text  Great white sharks in the Bay of Plenty.

 For goodness sake, every year there are over 100 deaths or seriously injured people by great whites sharks. I think there should be Shark nets 1km from shore. A white pointer/great white sharks have up to 3,000 teeth, have up to 5 rows of teeth, if one falls out another will take it’s place. If we do put up shark nets swimmers wont be in such big risk. SO PUT UP NETS!!

 If we put up nets we wont have ambulances dashing out of the  hospital to help the hurt people and leaving the less doctors to look after the ill patients that have cancer or worse deceases. So why didn’t we have shark nets in the first place so we didn’t have any more problems. If you see a shark or an sharks fin don’t panic just go to tell the lifeguards and they will sort it out. This won’t happened if we had shark nets in the first place. Sharks are really sneaky they will mostly look for there pray for about 20min then make there first move.

 There are NOT ENOUGH lifeguards on the beaches to watch all the swimmings. Every hour or half an hour there should be an bp boat that goes out round the beach to double check that every on is all right because it is tough to look out at all the swimmings cause sometimes the waves are high and cant see the swimmings behind the wave. If they cant see behind the waves a shark might lurking up on it’s future dinner. SO PUT UP NETS!!

 Seen you are going to put up nets it isn't going to just one meter down it is going to be all the to the bottom, so the great white wont go under the nets and sneak the way to shore and attack. This problem is really bad because great white sharks are the most dangerous type of sharks. All the population will go down because of the great white shark attack...but we want the population to go up so we need shark nets up.

 If you do not put up nets we will have heaps more sharks  circling boats for half an hour. So we NEED TO PUT UP NETS!